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The Writing Course
2026–2027

An interest-driven 8th grade writing curriculum, built at home, taught one nameable technique at a time.

Version 1.3 · August 7, 2026 · Companion to Teaching Writing at Home: Research Notes and the evidence review What Actually Works in Teaching Writing to Adolescents · Calendar matched to the local school district (first day Aug 3, last day May 28, 180 days)

This document is the course. It defines the year's goals, the quarter-by-quarter map with due dates, and — most importantly — the protocols used to run it day to day: how each daily handout gets generated, how completed work gets evaluated, and how the course gets steered as we learn what's working. Individual lessons are not pre-written; they are created each morning from the recipe in §6, aimed at whatever the skills tracker (§5) says matters right now. That is by design: the research says responsive teaching beats a fixed script, and it keeps the course steerable all year.

§1How to use this document

Standing rule for every lesson, all year: each lesson teaches one nameable technique, shows it working in a mentor text, then has her use it immediately with a specific product goal. Assigning writing is not teaching writing. If a handout doesn't have a technique you can name in five words, it isn't ready to print.

§2Course goals — what June looks like

By the end of May 2027, the student will have:

  1. Written and published in all three modes. At least one polished narrative, one informative/research piece, and one full argument essay, each taken through the complete process (plan → draft → feedback → revise → edit → share with a real audience). This covers the full 8th grade standard.
  2. A repeatable writing process she can describe. She can say how she plans, what she does when a draft stalls, and what she looks for when revising — the explicit-strategy outcome the research ranks first. Built deliberately, not hoped for: each quarter teaches one named strategy (named on its §4 card), modeled aloud and handed over until she reaches for it unprompted (§6).
  3. Sentence-level command. Comma splices gone from final drafts; varied sentence openers; comfortable use of subordinate clauses and because/but/so reasoning. Built through daily ten-minute drills, never worksheets.
  4. Clean dialogue and paragraphing. Correct dialogue punctuation and deliberate multi-sentence paragraphs — her two most mechanical growth areas from the August baseline.
  5. Show-don't-tell as a habit, not a trick. Emotions dramatized through action, dialogue, and sensory detail rather than named.
  6. A capstone she's proud of — a sustained Q4 project of her choosing (illustrated storybook, animation script + storyboard, or collected works), printed or produced for a real audience.
  7. An intact love of writing. The non-negotiable. She started this year voluntarily writing 1,100-word stories with subverted endings; the course must end with that enthusiasm larger, not smaller. Every protocol below (limited feedback, choice of topics, real audiences) exists partly to protect this.

§3The weekly rhythm

The same shape every school week, all four quarters. Content changes; the rhythm doesn't.

CadenceActivityNotes
Daily · 10 min minimumFreewrite / journalLow stakes, never graded, never corrected. Stream-of-consciousness, any topic, no rules; turned in with the day's work. Prompt optional — her choice always wins. On every handout.
Daily · 10 min minimumSentence drillOne Hochman-style exercise — combine, expand, because/but/so, subordinate opener — built from whatever she's currently reading or writing. This is where comma splices actually get fixed. Included as the warm-up on every handout.
2–3×/weekLesson + assignmentA printed handout (§6): one technique, one mentor text, one assignment with specific product goals. Numbered continuously; STATUS.md tracks the next number. Never just read aloud — the technique gets modeled live first (§6): you try it in front of her before she uses it.
1–2×/weekWrite togetherInside the lesson or drafting block: co-draft an opening, trade alternating paragraphs, or both write to the same prompt and compare drafts. Collaborative writing is one of the research's strongest elements, and in a class of one, you are the partner.
Daily · 40–60 minDraftingThe non-negotiable heart of the day. Significant writing toward the current piece, every school day — the Challenge dial in STATUS.md sets the floor (currently 400+ words). Volume with enjoyment is the whole game; skill follows volume. Drafting happens on a word processor: she writes in Google Docs and sends the doc when finished; you print it for her hands and send a copy back in chat, so every piece exists both ways (the evidence review's word-processing findings endorse exactly this). And some days each week, write alongside her — your own notebook, your own project, visible struggle included. The mentor who writes is the practitioner canon's deepest rule.
Most FridaysShipA week of daily writing usually leaves something worth finishing and sharing — read aloud at dinner, printed, mailed. Scale flexes: a complete short piece (500–1,000 words), an installment of a cumulative project, or a capstone stage delivered as a real thing. A celebration, not a deadline: if the piece needs another week, it takes it. What never slides is the daily writing.
Weekly · 15–20 minConferenceUsually paired with the Friday ship: a short, real conversation about the week's piece. She talks first — what was she trying to do, where did it fight her. You answer as a reader ("here's where I leaned in; here's where I got lost"), then one named strength, one teaching point, and agree the next piece's goal together. The §7 feedback note is this conversation's written record, not a replacement for it.
QuarterlyReview + steerRe-read the quarter's work together, write the growth memo (§7), adjust the next quarter's plan (§8).

§4The year at a glance — and each quarter in detail

Four quarters, each anchored in one mode, sequenced to start where her enthusiasm already is. Dates follow the school calendar; due dates are the fixed milestones. Weekly technique order within a quarter is a menu, not a schedule — pick based on the tracker and what her current piece needs. The Friday ship rhythm (§3) runs all year: the Q1 table below maps every ship — targets, not tests; only capstone dates are fixed. Q2–Q4 tables name the anchor milestones only, and what the in-between Fridays ship gets decided at each quarterly review.

QuarterDatesAnchor modeCapstone deliverableCapstone due
Q1Aug 3 – Oct 2Narrative & descriptionOriginal short story, publishedFri Oct 2
Q2Oct 19 – Dec 22Informative / explanatoryResearch report, formatted & publishedFri Dec 18
Q3Jan 5 – Mar 12ArgumentFull argument essay with counterclaimFri Mar 12
Q4Mar 29 – May 28Capstone / multi-genreHer chosen capstone + year portfolioFri May 21

Breaks: Labor Day Sep 7 · Fall Break Oct 5–16 · Thanksgiving Nov 25–27 · Winter Break Dec 23–Jan 4 · MLK Jan 18 and Presidents' Day Feb 15 (unless used for make-up) · Spring Break Mar 15–26. No milestones land adjacent to a break re-entry; first week back is always a soft week.

Q1 Narrative & Description — Story Craft Mon Aug 3 – Fri Oct 2 · 44 days

The point of this quarter: she already writes complete stories with real arcs and revises voluntarily. Q1 sharpens the craft inside that enthusiasm: dramatizing instead of naming emotion, varying sentences, handling dialogue mechanics, and building real paragraphs — while establishing the daily rhythm and the feedback culture.

This quarter's named strategy: her story planner, made official. She already plans before drafting; together, turn those instinctive moves into a named, written strategy (character + want + obstacle + turn + ending — her real moves, her name for it), model planning a fresh story aloud with it, then hand it over. It's hers when she runs it unprompted on a new piece — advance by criterion, not calendar (§6).

Technique menu (each becomes one or more lessons)

  • Show-don't-tell: actions, body, and dialogue instead of named emotions (Lesson 3, already prepared — her #1 growth area)
  • Dialogue mechanics: punctuation, capitalization, tags, new-speaker-new-paragraph
  • Sentence openers: subordinate-clause and participial starts to break the "She… She… The dragon…" pattern
  • Sentence combining to kill comma splices (taught in her own sentences, e.g. "She really wanted to go forward but she couldn't, she was frozen with fear")
  • Paragraphing on purpose: what goes together and why; the one-sentence-paragraph as a deliberate effect, not a default
  • Pacing: stretching the important moment, compressing travel
  • Endings: earned reflection vs. summary; how her subverted-ending instinct works and when to deploy it
  • Reading like a writer: pull apart a paragraph from a book she loves (HTTYD novels, current reads) — one move per session

The Q1 ship map — something ships most Fridays

ShipsScaleFriday
Lessons 1–4 (snapshot, dragon story, creature study, dialogue scene) — done, evaluated
Piece 2: HTTYD scene rewritten from another character's POV, or "The Dragon in the Mist" revisited applying show-don't-tell + dialogue mechanicsFull piece — shared at homeFri Aug 14
Field guide entry #1 — one illustrated creature entry (description muscle: precise nouns, sensory detail)InstallmentFri Aug 21
Field guide entry #2InstallmentFri Aug 28
Piece 3: Creature field guide assembled — 3+ illustrated entries, titled and bound/printedFull piece — sharedFri Sep 4
Capstone stage 1: original short story in her own world (not a continuation) — planned, and the opening scene read aloudCapstone stageFri Sep 11
Capstone stage 2: full draft deliveredCapstone stageFri Sep 18
Capstone stage 3: revised with feedbackCapstone stageFri Sep 25
Q1 Capstone: the story published — printed and read aloud, or mailedFull process + publicationFri Oct 2

These Fridays are targets, not tests — only the capstone date is fixed. If a week wobbles, shrink that Friday's ship (§8: shrink the piece, not the process) or let it slide a week; what never slides is the daily writing. Labor Day Sep 7 shortens the stage-1 week to four days — planning week, so it absorbs it. Fall Break Oct 5–16 follows the capstone, so the quarter ends on a celebration, not a scramble.

Q2 Informative / Explanatory — Research & Explanation Mon Oct 19 – Tue Dec 22 · 44 days

The point of this quarter: writing that teaches a reader something, using more than one source. Summarization (tied for the research's strongest practice) lives here. The trick is keeping it interest-driven: ferrets, insects, Minecraft, and how animation works are all legitimate research topics.

This quarter's named strategy: the summarizing rule set — keep the main idea, delete the trivial and the redundant, write the synopsis in your own words. Modeled on real sources, practiced weekly, handed over; it powers the note-taking and quoting work on the menu below.

Technique menu

  • Summarizing a source in her own words — taught explicitly, practiced weekly
  • Note-taking without copying; quoting vs. paraphrasing
  • Judging sources: who wrote this and how do they know?
  • Organizing structures: compare/contrast, cause/effect, sequence, problem/solution
  • Formatting for readers: headings, captions, intro/conclusion moves
  • Precise vocabulary and formal-but-alive tone
  • Sentence work continues: appositives ("the ferret, a member of the weasel family, …") are the Q2 drill star

Milestones

DeliverableFull process?Due
Research topic chosen + 3 candidate sources foundFri Oct 23
Piece 1: a short explainer or how-to in her wheelhouse (Minecraft guide, "how animation works," pet-care how-to) with headings and one diagramYes — sharedFri Nov 13
Research report: notes + outline completeFri Nov 20
Research report: full draft (Thanksgiving Nov 25–27 falls after)Fri Dec 4
Q2 Capstone: research report revised, formatted, published (printed booklet or shared digitally with family)Yes — full process + publicationFri Dec 18
Dec 21–22: read-aloud, wrap-up, no new workDec 22
Q3 Argument — Claims, Evidence, Counterclaims Tue Jan 5 – Fri Mar 12 · 47 days

The point of this quarter: the 8th grade summit — state a claim, support it with evidence, and take the other side seriously enough to answer it. Start with arguments she has actual stakes in; formality comes last.

This quarter's named strategy: TREE, plus the counterclaim move — Topic (the claim), Reasons (three or more), Explain each, Ending; then "someone might say… but…" planned in from the start, not bolted on. Modeled first on an argument she has real stakes in, then run on every argument piece until she plans with it unprompted.

Technique menu

  • Claim vs. opinion vs. fact; what counts as evidence
  • Because/but/so at essay scale: reasons that actually support the claim
  • The counterclaim move: "someone might say… but…" — steelmanning, not strawmanning
  • Formal tone without going dead; cutting "I think" and "very"
  • Evidence from texts: citing the actual film/book/source, not vibes
  • Structure: hook, claim, reasons in strongest-last order, counterclaim, conclusion that doesn't just repeat
  • Sentence drills: subordinating concessives — although, even though, while — the counterclaim's grammar

Milestones

DeliverableFull process?Due
Piece 1: a review with a defended ranking (e.g. "the best HTTYD film," best Minecraft update, best book this year) — evidence from the works themselvesYes — sharedFri Jan 29
Piece 2: a real persuasive pitch — something she actually wants (a pet, a trip, a purchase, a privilege), delivered to its real audience (us), and answered seriouslyYes — deliveredFri Feb 19
Argument essay: claim chosen + evidence gathered (e.g. "animals X should/shouldn't be kept as pets")Fri Feb 26
Argument essay: full draftFri Mar 5
Q3 Capstone: argument essay revised and finished — claim, evidence, counterclaim, formal styleYes — full processFri Mar 12

Spring Break Mar 15–26 follows immediately. If MLK Day or Presidents' Day become school make-up days, they're catch-up days here, not new-lesson days.

Q4 Capstone — One Big Thing, Start to Finish Mon Mar 29 – Fri May 28 · 45 days

The point of this quarter: a sustained project of her choosing that uses the whole year's toolkit and ends in real publication. Lessons in Q4 mostly serve the project — mini-lessons on whatever the work needs that week — plus portfolio and reflection at the end.

This quarter's strategy work: no new strategy — independence. The year's hand-over completes: she chooses which planner the capstone needs and runs it herself; mini-lessons revisit a strategy only when the work shows it's needed.

Capstone options (she chooses; others welcome)

  • An illustrated storybook — written, revised, illustrated, printed and bound
  • A script + storyboard for a short animation — dialogue, scene direction, shot planning; feeds her animation goal directly, and could actually be animated over the summer
  • "Collected Works 2026–27" — the year's best pieces, each given a final revision pass, with an introduction by the author, printed as a real book

Milestones

DeliverableDue
Capstone chosen + one-page proposal (what, for whom, what finished looks like)Fri Apr 2
Project plan: outline / chapter list / scene listFri Apr 9
Midpoint check-in: half the project drafted; scope adjusted honestly if neededFri Apr 30
Full draft completeFri May 7
Revision + production (illustrations, formatting, printing)Fri May 14
Capstone published — printed, bound, performed, or premiered for the familyFri May 21
Final week: portfolio assembly, side-by-side August-vs-May comparison, her own written reflection on the year, celebrationMay 24–28

§5The skills tracker

The tracker is the course's steering signal: a short list of current teaching points, drawn from her actual work, that daily drills and lesson choices aim at. It lives here and gets updated by the evaluation protocol (§7). Keep it to 3–5 active items — more than that and nothing gets focused attention. When an item stops appearing in her drafts for three consecutive pieces, retire it (move it to "Secured") and promote something new.

Active teaching points (baseline: August 2026, from Lessons 1–2)

Teaching pointEvidence from her workHow we're fixing itRetire when…
Comma splices & run-ons"She really wanted to go forward but she couldn't, she was frozen with fear."Daily sentence-combining drills using her own sentences; never worksheetsAbsent from three consecutive final drafts
Telling instead of showing"with fear in his voice," "Clara was shocked," "he said emotionally"Lesson 3 + ongoing; drill: rewrite one "told" emotion per day as action/dialogueNamed emotions rare in drafts, not just revisions
Repetitive sentence openersRuns of "The dragon… / Clara… / She…"Subordinate-clause opener drills; "no more than two sentences in a row start the same way" as a product goalVaried openers appear in first drafts unprompted
Dialogue conventions"can I try to help?", "The dragon said"One dialogue-mechanics lesson + a pocket reference card; checked in edit passesClean dialogue in two consecutive pieces
ParagraphingDraft was mostly one-sentence paragraphs; she began merging in revision — she's readyExplicit paragraph lesson; "group these sentences" drillDeliberate multi-sentence paragraphs in first drafts

Secured skills (name them in feedback; keep them warm)

§6Lesson generation protocol — how each handout gets made

Lessons are generated the morning of (or the night before), one or two at a time, by you + the AI, using this recipe. This is the section to reference when you sit down and say "make today's handout."

The strategy through-line (slower than the lesson cycle)

Craft techniques change lesson to lesson; strategies — the named, reusable procedures for planning and revising — run on a quarterly cycle instead. Each §4 card names the quarter's one strategy. The teaching arc, per SRSD: talk it through → model it aloud → she memorizes it → supported use → independent use. Two rules make it stick: advance by criterion, not calendar — a strategy is learned when she reaches for it unprompted on a new piece — and pair it with self-regulation: she sets the piece's goal from the strategy, checks her own steps off before handing work in, and says afterward what worked. Handouts reference the current strategy by name whenever the assignment involves planning or revising.

Every handout follows this template

  1. Header: lesson number (continuous — STATUS.md tracks the next number), date, and the technique named in plain words as one plain sentence ("Making fear visible without saying 'afraid'").
  2. Warm-up (10 min minimum): one sentence drill targeting an active tracker item (§5), built from content she currently cares about — her own story, her current book, dragons, ferrets, Minecraft.
  3. Freewrite (10 min minimum): on every handout, every day. Never graded — stream-of-consciousness with no rules to follow — but turned in with the day's work; one prompt offered, her own choice always wins.
  4. Mini-lesson: the technique explained briefly, then shown working in a short mentor-text excerpt — ideally from a book she loves. One "how did the author do this?" question.
  5. Writing Assignment: one labeled section ("Writing Assignment: ‹name›") holding the whole task as complete sentences, with specific, countable requirements, never "write well." Good: "Write the scene so we know Clara is terrified without using afraid, scared, terrified, or fear. Include at least two sensory details. Aim for 400–600 words." Bad: "add more description."
  6. Checklist: 3–4 concrete success criteria she can self-check before handing it in — including the current strategy's steps when the task involves planning or revising. These same criteria drive the evaluation in §7.
  7. Stretch: one harder variation, printed as a normal part of the day — the handout never labels it optional ("optional", "only if", "if you want"). The parent decides on the day whether it's skippable and tells her directly.

Delivery: model it live

The mini-lesson is a demonstration, not a reading. Before she uses the technique, try it yourself in front of her on a sentence or two of your own — thinking aloud, false starts and crossed-out verbs included. The messy middle is the lesson: a classroom teacher can rarely afford it; you can. (Model → practice → reflect is the strongest-evidence teaching cycle in the secondary-writing practice guide.)

Voice and format rules

Daily generation — run the skill Run /lessons in a project session. It reads this plan (current quarter card in §4, this template, the steering rules in §8), STATUS.md, and the log tail, picks the technique the tracker most needs, and writes the handout as a self-contained printable HTML file in writing/lessons/ — HTML only, no PDFs are created or kept; print from the browser (Cmd-P) when needed. Variants: /lessons 3 for a coherent mini-sequence · /lessons 2 she's obsessed with Wings of Fire, lean into it for count + steering · /lessons redo N <reason> to regenerate an existing handout in place.

Customization is expected at this step, every day — swap the mentor text, change the topic to this week's obsession, halve the assignment on a low-energy day, or abandon the plan entirely because she asked a great question yesterday. The technique-menu items are the checklist; the order and flavor are yours.

§7Evaluation protocol — what happens to completed work

Completed assignments land in writing/completed/ (established format: planning answers + rough draft + completed version in one file; she works in Google Docs and sends the doc when finished — it's printed for her and archived here). Then, together with the AI:

  1. Evaluate against that lesson's checklist criteria (headed "Checklist"; lessons 4–7 used "You nailed it if…") — not against everything writing could ever be. Did she use the technique the lesson taught?
  2. Scan against the skills tracker. Which active items showed up? Which didn't? Any candidate for retirement, or a new pattern worth adding?
  3. Hold the conference, then write the feedback note. Feedback is a conversation first (§3): she talks first about what she was trying to do, you respond as a reader, and the note records what was said. The fixed format:
    • One genuine strength, named precisely, with her exact words quoted back. ("'I suppose if you must,' said with fear — that line does characterization and plot at once.")
    • One teaching point. One. Usually the next lesson's seed.
  4. Log a one-line evaluation note (date, piece, criteria met, tracker observations, next-lesson seed) so the next generation session can read the trail.

What we deliberately don't do: mark every error (teaches that writing is error-avoidance), grade individual pieces (feedback beats grades in the research), or fix her sentences for her (the comma splices fall to focused drills, not red ink). Freewrites and journals are never evaluated at all.

Quarterly review

In the last week of each quarter: re-read the quarter's completed folder together, pick her best piece and her favorite piece (they may differ — good conversation), write a short growth memo (what improved, with before/after quotes; what's next), and update the tracker and next quarter's plan. If a grade is ever needed for records, it's assigned holistically from the quarter's body of work at this review — mastery of the quarter's techniques, completion of milestones — not averaged from pieces.

§8Steering the course

This plan is a starting map, and the territory will disagree with it. Rules for changing it:

§9Change log

DateVersionChange
Aug 5, 20261.0Initial course plan, built from the August research notes, the 2026–27 school calendar, and the baseline assessment of Lessons 1–2.
Aug 6, 20261.1Brought up to the print standard (dev/how-to-print.html): standard print block added, tables given real header rows. §6 daily prompt replaced with the /lessons skill invocation — handouts are HTML-only, printed on demand, no stored PDFs. Day-to-day operation now runs via the /lessons and /evaluate skills with STATUS.md + LOG.md state (spec: dev/skills-build-plan-for-writing.html).
Aug 6, 20261.2Freewrite policy corrected (§3 table, §6 template): still never graded and rule-free — stream-of-consciousness, any topic — but turned in with the day's work, not kept private. Skeleton comment updated to match. §7 unchanged: freewrites are still never evaluated.
Aug 7, 20261.3Aligned with the evidence review (teaching-writing-research-2.html), which post-dates this plan's sources. Four additions: (1) one named strategy per quarter, taught SRSD-style to independence — strategy lines on each §4 card, through-line + checklist hook in §6, goal #2 updated; (2) live modeling — mini-lessons demonstrated with a think-aloud, and the parent writes alongside her some days (§3, §6); (3) weekly conference, writer talks first — new §3 row, §7 reframed so the feedback note records the conversation; (4) write-together as a standing weekly move (§3). Documented the existing drafting workflow: Google Docs → send → printed copy + chat copy (§3, §7). Small fixes: §2 drill time matched to §3 (ten minutes); Q2 summarization ranking corrected (tied for strongest, not #2); stale "next is Lesson 4" pointers now defer to STATUS.md; companion line names both research documents.